Emerge Beyond Circles
by John Geers
Two couples from Madison, with entwined destinies, both seeking love, are connected by a single element: the ancient Siberian witch, Thuban-Pol. Her magic will either be their savior or their ruin.
Thuban-Pol is the latest in a lineage of Siberian witches. Their eternal aim is to guide humanity to true love. Their guiding tenet, “For love to bloom, these three endure: sacrifice, perseverance and suffering. But the greatest of these is suffering.”
Since the dawn of humanity, they have summoned countless couples, inflicting suffering with the intention to grow true love. They have never succeeded…but now they have their best opportunity in two couples from Wisconsin.
If they succeed, love will finally bloom for all of humanity, if the suffering inflicted on these couples doesn’t kill them first.
Slivered gray wood covered the outside. Macabre scenes carved like tattoos stretched from ground to gutter and marched around each corner in a black parade.
Clint stepped close to the dark images and put a finger to one. “It’s soft and squishy, like driveway tar in summer, but it doesn’t stick to my skin. Weird.” His finger went to his nose, and he said, “Interesting. Hey, sniff this stuff.”
Lucy pushed her nose forward and sniffed the carving. “Yum, smells like…” she let the scent tumble around her brain, “like peppermint and something else I can’t place, but definitely peppermint.”
“Check out these carvings of animals,” he said.
Real and imagined creatures prowled midst the gray slivers. Indigenous animals were well represented; the snowy owl, Arctic fox, caribou and ermine. Along with these were animals too strange to be from this age. Some warned. Others offered a wry smile of welcome. A serpent barred vicious fangs stained crimson, dripping pregnant bulbs of creamy poison. A grizzly bear smothered the head of a besieged she-wolf with one massive paw while tonguing the cheek of its pup. Wild caribou ran in stampede along the edge of a deep ravine, flirting with the abyss.
Woven among the animals were humans. Black eyes. Black bodies. Black forms. Black illuminated. A child held the face of its mother. A man raised a silver sword over the broken body of his slain foe. A son leaped into the arms of his father, reminiscent of the Prodigal Son, but on this wall, soaked in black, the anguish and joy were fresh. Sex was here too. Bodies engaged in all variety of forbidden acts, twisted and beautiful.
As the black parade marched on, frozen poses of pain pinched Lucy, forcing her tight against his chest once more.
A man groped the ground with orange coals where eyes once took in the world. A woman with a flapping tongue, split like the Serpent, hissed a song to the full blood moon. A young man pled for mercy, torn fingers lost in the gnashing teeth of his lover. A man pounded the ice above his head. A child wailed in the jaws of a terrible beast, eyes begging for a hero, a call for rescue swallowed by winter. A family huddled tight, defying flames that, in real life, would be their end. A woman slumped with blood and afterbirth at her feet, her ashen eyes stone, silence of mother and child scattered across eternity. A wrinkled face echoed hope, sealed behind tortured lips.
The beginning was a little hard to get through, but I liked the story much better when Clint and Lucy arrived. It’s an interesting take on humanity to be sure, but the description is there to draw you in.
How to Create a Dynamic Plot Line…IMO
A dynamic plot line begins at the end, comes to life in planning and blooms when the author is fearless.
Begin at the end. Before you even write a single word or plan a thing, decide what kind of ending you want. Will it be sad or happy or bitter-sweet? Do you want to kill some characters? Do you want to wrap up the story or leave it open? It helps guide your writing when you know where everything is headed.
Planning. I spent four months of solid planning before I wrote the first word. When you plan thoroughly you not only flesh out exactly what is happening in your book, but you gain a deep understanding of why things are happening. In my case, I already spent four months getting familiar with my characters; how they think, what they are like, how they react, and so on. Because I had a detailed chapter by chapter plan prepared and was intimately aware of my characters, I was able to write authentic dialogue and keep the plot pace high.
Be fearless. If you want a dynamic plot line you are going to have to go big. Think outside the box. If a character needs to die…do it with ingenuity and style. If a character needs to see the future…ditch the crystal ball and give them a shockingly brutal method instead. I felt strongly that I wanted every chapter to contain a big event that happens in a dynamic way. I did not want a chapter to go by that was blah-blah-blah.
There ya go. Now go write something.
AUTHOR Bio and Links:
John Geers drew inspiration to begin his debut novel from a dream he experienced.
Hours spent in the caffeinated air of his favorite coffeehouse proved to be the perfect place to complete Emerge Beyond Circles.
John is a middle school literacy educator, where he inspires and is inspired by the writers of tomorrow. He is the founder and facilitator of his school’s Creative Writing Club. He is also a columnist for the online magazine Elephant Journal.
He loves a good story, being on the water, and witty puns. He can be found hiking the wilderness, biking big hills, sipping dark coffee, and looking for a chair in the mall.
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GIVEAWAY INFORMATION and RAFFLECOPTER CODE
John Geers will be awarding a $25 Amazon GC, a signed copy of the book, and a stuffed tiger (US only) to a randomly drawn winner via rafflecopter during the tour.
Lorana Hoopes is a Christian author who focuses on children’s book and adult inspirational books with a touch of romance.Her books are available at Amazon.